Took these in Spain in September and no matter how I try I'm just not sure if they work. I took them at an odd angle to start with and that didn't help! Tried B & W, Sepia etc. etc. Shall I keep them or not? I like the way they mirror each other's body language.
I like them both and I believe they work. I do like the first one better, because in that one their expressions really mirror each other. I would try a bit of a tighter crop on the first one, similar to what you did on the second one.