I like this one. I love all the lines going up and down and across and I like the house which deepens the mystery of what this is about.
Thank you all for your comments, here's another view. If you don't mind, I'd be interested to hear which you prefer, or think works better.
Oh, I see - didn't realize you were really talking to me.I like shot #1 BB...now waiting for the story...I'm talking about that car and the stripes...what is the story behind it ?